Here are some key points to follow:
- be creative
- be concise, honest and accurate
- don’t just list what you’ve done, where you’ve been etc.
- include your value proposition and try to address a companies ROI on you
- differentiate yourself from the herd
- use specific examples of what you’ve accomplished in your career
Example of a mediocre resume (excerpt):
Employment History:
10/06-9/07 ABC Glass Company, Canvasser -- Sales lead generation; produced, wrote, directed, and starred in company’s training film, trained new employees
3/06-9/07 ABC LLC, Transaction Coordinator -- Assisted homeowners in pre-foreclosure transactions
6/04-12/05 ABC Edgewater Grille, Expeditor -- Coordinated distribution of orders from kitchen to servers, trained new employees
12/02-12/05 ABC Louisiana Style Café, Server Assistant -- Assisted servers and managers with full range of restaurant duties, trained new employees
Skills & Experience:
5+years in fine dining
Excellent hands-on customer service skills
Experience driving small, recreational vessels
Extensive experience working in teams in high-pressure environments
Several years sales experience and related training
Travel throughout United States, Mexico, and the Caribbean
Example of a good resume (excerpt):
PROFILE:
· Comprehensive, executive-level experience in business management, including full responsibility for business plan development/execution, profit building, budgeting, team management/training/mentoring, operations, and strategic planning.
· Skilled in sales forecasting, business development, change management, revenue generation, turnarounds, early-stage operations, relationship development, and policy development.
· Proven ability to identify growth opportunities and create/execute successful short- and long-term business strategies.
· Visionary leader with the ability to implement creative business solutions, motivate staff, improve profit center performance, and streamline operating procedures.
Experience:
ABC Company
A national mortgage finance organization with lending operations in 16 states.
Sr. Vice President
Led a team of three Division Managers and 30 loan officers producing $312 million in annual loan volume. Reported directly to the President. Directed strategic planning/development, training, marketing, and sales, with P&L responsibility. Hired, trained and mentored loan officers and administrative staff. Established and upheld performance standards and goal attainment.
~ Personally responsible for over $33 million in annual loan volume (personal production).
~ Managed all aspects of an account base of 10-25 clients, including business development, networking, sales, service, relationship building, and on-going support.
~ Ranked as top loan officer for 18 consecutive months; held records for the highest revenue per loan, the largest single revenue loan, and the largest revenue month.
~ Played a key role in the transition from an individual to a team structure, including developing the business plan for the team concept. Worked closely with top management to facilitate this transition.
~ Grew the business from 60 loans per month to 150 loans per month as a result of implementing a team structure approach.
~ Assisted in managing the transition from a broker-based loan origination company to a correspondent banking organization.
Experience:
ABC Mortgage
A start-up regional mortgage broker licensed in CA and CO.
Sr. Loan Officer/Sales Trainer
Counseled clients on the loan application process and advised on various types of loan packages offered; made recommendations to meet their specific needs.
Corresponded with/or interviewed applicants or creditors to resolve questions regarding application information. Maintained simultaneous responsibility for training and sales.
~ Aggressively identified, hired, trained, and developed key talent.
~ Developed sales curriculum, including scripts for loan officers, telemarketers, support staff, and call center; trained sales team regarding effective techniques.
~ Consistently ranked as top sales performer throughout tenure in both volume and revenue.
ABC Motorcars,
The largest Mercedes Benz Dealer in the world and one of Ward’s Dealer Business Top 500. Generates more than 2,000 new unit sales and total revenue of $169+ million.
Client Care Specialist
Provided sales and customer relations management. Maintained the dealership’s client base for new model releases, events, specials, and lease retention. Completed formal call center development and scripting training from Universal Dealer Consultants.
~ Played a key role in the development, implementation, and launch of an outbound call center accounting for over 100 daily client contracts.
~ Assisted in growing sales revenue from 25 vehicles per month to over 100 vehicles per month through daily client contact, follow-up, and internet-based advertising.
~ Developed cross-promotion strategies, an internet marketing program, and advanced client relations throughout the dealership to provide high-end client care and services.
~ Recognized as the top-ranked Client Care Representative nationwide.
Keep in mind that the HR Representative is the “Gatekeeper.” It is their job to filter, allow and deny access! This includes receptionists, secretaries and administrative assistants. If you can, find a way to get around the gatekeeper in a respectful manner. Keep in mind; you are not always aware of the gatekeeper’s relationship to the decision maker. Also, these people often represent themselves as the key decision maker or hiring authority when they are in fact not. They are there to advertise a position, collect information and scan documents for key information. When presenting your resume, review the job description in order to address key skills and qualifications.
Some recruiters will re-work your resume but not many. They really don’t have the time. They also don’t have the time to “represent” you to companies. Again, if you are a match for one of their job orders (openings) they will market you to their client. They may even use your resume for marketing efforts to attain new clients but not necessarily to get you a job. Be selective with who you work with when looking for a job/ career change. After all, they are selective with who they are working with as well. They are being paid to find the “perfect” candidate for their paying client (often 30% of starting salary or more).
I do think that it can be beneficial to have someone skilled review, revise, and/or rewrite your resume for you. However, this type of service should not cost you more than $500 nationwide. Remember, no one else can really market you or network for you. Be careful not to get sucked into a “career marketing” or “personal PR” scam.